clara
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Post by clara on Feb 11, 2015 15:36:51 GMT -8
This is the poem Lagin spoke at the festival, or as much of it as I could get down. I wrote most of it down, but some of it is guesswork according to context, so some words may be off, and there may be things missing. The question marked/parenthesised words are ones I'm particularly unsure of. If anyone else took down notes and wants to share edits and whatnot, please do so. Here we go:
There is no love found in (my?) dream of endless love you are forever walking beyond the door again what did we do to deserve this torture you and I what crimes were ours but love if we should be human there is no light in the world for us what loveless gods would cast us out I am without them without (anything? any of them?) you are the only celestial that remains for me I will worship your laughter as they do the wood I am leaves you will forever be my sunlight and wind let the rest fall away if only you knew me if only you knew (what? who?) we were my flower let the world fall away let all their dreams destroy them my dream is only you you are the last dream of me do you dream of me say you do
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Post by ElfChild on Feb 11, 2015 17:37:57 GMT -8
I'm pretty certain that line 4 is "what crimes were ours but love". I recall line 9 being "without any of them", but I could very easily be mistaken. Pretty sure line ten is off, but I don't know what's off about it, which makes that terribly unhelpful. Pretty sure line 20 is "let all their dreams destroy them".
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Post by clara on Feb 11, 2015 18:31:29 GMT -8
Edited accordingly. Could line 10 be "you are the only celestial (that remains/remaining) for me"? My handwriting when I'm going this fast is really crap, so I have to guess a little, but that could be what it says.
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Post by ElfChild on Feb 11, 2015 18:33:57 GMT -8
That sounds right for line 10.
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Post by clara on Feb 11, 2015 19:13:50 GMT -8
Alright, fixed. I put "that remains", since that somehow sounds more fitting. Could be "who remains" too, but eh.
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Post by Mud on Aug 25, 2015 11:58:21 GMT -8
After my (Eleno's) encounter with Lagin over the last campout, when I got resurrected there was a paper in elven in my pocket, which had this poem on it (I'm also putting the poem below in case of inconsistancies):
There is no lover found, in my dream of out endless love You are forever walking beyond the door again What did we do to deserve this torture, you and I What crime was ours but love, that we should be hewn There is no light in the world for us What loveless gods would cast us out I am without them all now, without any of them You are the only celestial that remains for me And I will worship your laughter as they do the wood I am leaves and you will be forever my sunlights and wind Let the rest fall away, if only you knew me If only you knew who we were My flower Let the world fall away, and all their dreams destroy them My dream is only you Do you at least dream of me Say you do My Narwe
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